Angel of Death

Oh this was so beautiful and I really have no complaints or critiscms because this was just well-written and great just like all of your poems are. This actually made ...

Hello Ky! I actually love this, I really do (but...) I'm going to have to agree with Connie and Jiggy on this one. This is well written, as all your ...

Ah, this hasn't had any reviews! Well, hello! I rather liked this piece but I'm going to be a little nit-picky. I know that this came in a dream (a ...

Hello kris! Ugh it seems as though I don't read enough of your work. I actually like this. I love the way it was cultured and the words flowed well ...

This was pretty good and the length was okay for a preface. Her lips touched mine again and again leaving me breathless, grasping her waist, pulling her closer. My eyes ...

Another good chapter! First off, let me tell you that I'm not good at picking out grammatical errors, so my critiques will just be mainly about the big picture. I ...

Hello again KJ!! I really liked this chapter. Especially the conversation between Brittany and Becca. It just shows how real this story is and I can't wait to read the ...

YAY!!! Hey KJ, This was a good chapter as usual, and I'm glad you posted Chapter 20, so I don't have to complain. I think this chapter is a very ...

Hello! I really like the feel of it. Your characters have a well-rounded relationship and I can't wait to find out more about them. Your title is what caught my ...

Hey Miya! I must say that I love the title. It just makes me wonder what a bottled butterfly has to do with the story. Your characters are well developed ...

Hey JC! You've read my stuff before, so I thought I'd return the favor. I liked this, but I got the prologue feeling when I read this. I know others ...

Hello! I think this is a great poem, well more than great, fantastic! I felt every emotion that you wanted me to feel and I really hope that you just ...

I loved this poem Snoink! But I couldn't tell you exactly what it means though. There's just something about that embodies the morning and night time all at the same ...

Hey Ash! I saw this and I couldn't resist! This was written really well and I can't wait to read more. I could really feel Michael's emotions and I feel ...

Hey KJ, This was a really good paragraph. I really don't have anything to critique. It was flawless and the sex scene wasn't too graphic and I see what you ...